Many people always debate about developing the Amazon and buiding cities. Those against this idea always won! But, not today! We need to develop the Amazon by building cities. We can develop the Amazon by building cities that are eco-friendly. Many people oppose this because they think If we develop the Amazon by building cities, the enviroment is gone. But it is not true. When I was young, I agreed with them. Because for me, plants are more important than develop the Amazon by building city. I love plants. Of course until now. But now I realized I am wrong. Our technology already good. Also we have a good way to buiding cities Like putt out plants with root. The plants can live another place. Example sometimes we need move plants we pull out plants with root. It have another way. Build green city. Make a green tract of land, park... In there, have lots of plants and animals. I heard Freiburg in German, it is eco-friendly city. It is famous. In middle of there, has big park. So many german poeple event there. And they love there.
Now I will tell you some reasons.
First, we can prepare the natural disaster. Like... breakwater. When we set up that, we can prepare for floods and drought. So it is good for human also plants and animals too. And when we set up dam, we can get electricity and it also prepare flood and drought.
Last, we can live a convenient life. A city is needed by us. Because city help we can live a life of convenience. We can rid transportation, there have store... they also needful us. Many people want develop amazon cause of their's conveience life. Also we can grow plants. If we sell the plants and we get profit. Developing Amazon can be conveient life animals and like make zoo. They can livezoo and they get food, medical program... Also a botunical garden, plant's canlive in there.
In conclusion, we need to develop the Amazon for building city. It's not only for humans. It also for animals and plants. Why people always think opposition of my opinion? It is fized idea. If they really think about enviroment, they be agree my opinion. If we do not develop, we become die. Also animals and plants too. Remember, develop the Amazon is not destroy enviroment. It can be help for enviroment. Don't think about fized idea. It is not good for us! I repeat, developing Amazon by buiding city is good for us!!
Jihyun,
답글삭제This is an interesting essay with a good thesis. However, you need to also mention the arguments against your thesis and state why they are wrong using evidence.