My home oh my home
Big and large
You make me rest in you
I want to play with you
My home oh my home
How lovely and cure
Like sunflowers
In a flower garden
My home oh my home
What a comfortable house
I miss you!
My bed, desk, TV, computer...
My home oh my home
Very important for me!
Most of the time it is around to me
I love you, my home
Since Jan. 9
by.ji hyun lee
good~~
답글삭제역시 작가네^^ 잘썼다.
근데 home이 big and large는 좀 아닌듯(이건 house)~~
심적인 면에서의 의미인가?
warm and cozy는 어때? 엄마는 영어가 짧아서리...
sorry~~
I miss you~~ I love you.
I can only use English
삭제And just I wrote
I miss you too^^
Hi Ji Hyun,
답글삭제I can feel that you really love your home and miss it these days. This is a good ode but try to use more personifications to give your home human qualities.
Hi!
답글삭제Nice ode to your home. It clearly shows that you really like your home and feel comfortable in your home. House still seems like an inanimate object, so try to use more personifications.
-Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)
Huh, your opinion is a little different than mine.
답글삭제I actually don't miss my home....